All Comments on 'Planted'

by njoyjade

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NeonuroticNeonuroticover 10 years ago
Very good

I hear you on the weeds, been doing the same and having the same result. I like the flow of this poem, especially the second stanza.

HarryHillHarryHillover 10 years ago
njoy, good to see you

pull 'em don't spray 'em ....enough poison in the world . 5 smiles.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 10 years ago
Seriously

I usually object to words like

"Kaleidoscope"

Here it kind of makes the poem, hmmm what does she mean by....

5ed

AngelineAngelineover 10 years ago
Short and to the point

and that second quatrain is wonderful because a kaleidoscope does break an image into bits of image. I saw exactly what you wanted me to see. That's good! Glad you are around again. :-)

GuiltyPleasureGuiltyPleasureover 10 years ago
Weeds...

...are maligned, to hell with manicured lawns and Home 'n Garden flower beds, Let the kaleidoscopic world flourish. Voted, natch.

demure101demure101over 10 years ago
Beautiful!

And funny - Mmmm!

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