All Comments on 'Please Touch Me'

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briar_rosebriar_roseover 17 years ago
Wow!

I love it, it has nice structure, and is filled with desperate need that makes the reader tingle.

Reiner43Reiner43about 7 years ago
This poem drew me into your mind!

Well done, but patients should be spelled patience.

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