All Comments on 'Pleasure Slave Without a Owner'

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Baba8Baba8about 16 years ago
delete weakling writing

unwipe your writing of wimping weakling words that do not help in the images you are trying to create for the gentle reader. submit to the readers. master--lean. the first step is gentle. eliminate--I, A, my, you, your, who, only, any word ending in (ly). Tighten up, it feels better to the reader. the reader can lube it up to fit their image size.

Baba8Baba8about 16 years ago
delete weakling writing

unwipe your writing of wimping weakling words that do not help in the images you are trying to create for the gentle reader. submit to the readers. master--lean. the first step is gentle. eliminate--I, A, my, you, your, who, only, any word ending in (ly). Tighten up, it feels better to the reader. the reader can lube it up to fit their image size.

Baba8Baba8about 16 years ago
delete weakling writing

unwipe your writing of wimping weakling words that do not help in the images you are trying to create for the gentle reader. submit to the readers. master--lean. the first step is gentle. eliminate--I, A, my, you, your, who, only, any word ending in (ly). Tighten up, it feels better to the reader. the reader can lube it up to fit their image size.

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