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Some great imagery to behold, loved the lines

'a mass worm hole suicide

disguised and smiling while

eating chocolate cyanide'

delicious atmosphere, mentioned in today's new poem reviews

Here we have more a dark hole than a worm hole,

Or better yet, a black hole of depression

Where life gets sucked down into oblivion;

And what's better is it's not obvious until it's too late.

I love the imagery and wording here.

Leon is right, the flow is smooth as silk,

one would never notice till the end

they are being cut to ribbons~

I love it !!!