by ramonathompson
You write a lot of songs it looks like, there's poetry with audio, you should sing 'em. I wrote a song and posted it as audio called "Our Little Plan". Reading lyrics isn't very fun, especially when you know the melody of the song.
he's a rubbish critic. Though he's right about songs being terrible reads. Ramona if you're ever published and distributed in any chain book store I'll buy a dozen of your books and send you the receipt as proof. I'll probably just bury them in my backyard when i get home, but I'm sure there's some hackneyed publisher somewhere willing to publish you. Also, I've done the math with your 20years as a writer. Based on the max age of your profile, 32, you would of started as a writer at age 12, which is absolutely silly to state and re-state in your poems. You know, I started writing at age five, so have I spent twenty years as a writer? It's a predicament, cuz then if you're actually forty and have been writing since age 20 it's fine, but it's also bizzaro/queer that you're writing to contempo pop meant for sixteen year olds. Anyway, I'm sure you're a good girl, I'm not criticizing your character, just your idea of artistic expression.