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by ramonathompson

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bflagsstbflagsstabout 15 years ago
Song

You write a lot of songs it looks like, there's poetry with audio, you should sing 'em. I wrote a song and posted it as audio called "Our Little Plan". Reading lyrics isn't very fun, especially when you know the melody of the song.

Epmd607Epmd607about 15 years ago
don't listen to him

he's a rubbish critic. Though he's right about songs being terrible reads. Ramona if you're ever published and distributed in any chain book store I'll buy a dozen of your books and send you the receipt as proof. I'll probably just bury them in my backyard when i get home, but I'm sure there's some hackneyed publisher somewhere willing to publish you. Also, I've done the math with your 20years as a writer. Based on the max age of your profile, 32, you would of started as a writer at age 12, which is absolutely silly to state and re-state in your poems. You know, I started writing at age five, so have I spent twenty years as a writer? It's a predicament, cuz then if you're actually forty and have been writing since age 20 it's fine, but it's also bizzaro/queer that you're writing to contempo pop meant for sixteen year olds. Anyway, I'm sure you're a good girl, I'm not criticizing your character, just your idea of artistic expression.

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