All Comments on 'Pointing North ~'

I'd like to offer my opinion. It is a poem, and it's certainly appropriate for this site, but I honestly feel like this is below average. I have read better from you. A poem like this is so easy to write. I'd love to see you challenge yourself a bit more. Of course, you may be here just for fun, and that's fine too. :)

*winks*

shame on you !!!

telling the truth like this !

very HOttttttttt, little number

RF, and very naughty,

complete loss of inhibition,

and now we all need

showers****..

{smile}

sGp

This may be trite,

but who'd a thunk,

naughty could be so nice?

like that line especially! Raw and effective!