All Comments on 'Pretending Without a License'

with density... reading that in one breath had my head spinning at the end. One element I look for in prose poetry is a density of either images, or metaphor, or just stuff... this one has all that. Good stuff...

jim : )

this poem is mentioned in the New Poem Review Thread:

http://www.literotica.com:81/forum/showthread.php?p=15098747&posted=1#post15098747

The bombardment of such vivid imagery packed so tightly made me breathless. It's a neat piece to read aloud. I kept trying to decode it though ... thinking if I paused at just the right collocation, I would see all things clearly. ;) Nice job!

Luck,

Yui

Made me dizzy. Nice work. ~Imp

I love it Bill. A bit dark on tha first read, but then I get it. A lotta fun, and very witty. Just me ~ grins*

Again ... Great imagery here. Your opening line pulls the reader in and takes us on a rollercoaster ride full of wit, and even a deep thought or two. Nice ... Very nice ~!!

More,

if you please ~ * flowers *

that was way to much DADA <GRIN> A CARTOON POEM? either way this was one wild literary journey <ty b>

Had to catch my breath after that one. Jam packed imagery in a finely tuned delivery. Thanks Bill

like a pair of new jeans...framed into a nice shapely body...clever and witty ...like the style...blue

I really like this piece. Your style always captures my mind and takes it on a journey. The stream of consciousness word play you put out here gives us a peek into our own souls and makes me wish for everything all at once. Thanks for sharing this with us.

you come up with the most unique and original ideas BD!

kisses,

~LB~