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Her moan makes me wonder why this isn't listed as erotic.

the entire poem becomes erotic at the very end. You are an intriguing poet and I have enjoyed everything of yours I have read so far. Can't say that about too many poets, lol.

NJ

Damn, that is really, really evocative. My personal grail has always been to write the poem that actually inspires orgasm just from the words on the page.

You got close here. Damn close.