All Comments on 'Products of Their Environment'

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sacksackover 19 years ago
very different....

"vacant coitus" is a cool phrase. Perhaps too much repetition of "products of his,her,their,my,environment", which is not a particularly poetic phrase anyway.

annaswirlsannaswirlsover 19 years ago
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this was an interesting read-- "product of his environment" in general reads to me in a cynical tone. It is not a pretty line, but it is powerful. I agree with Sack that it might be over-repeated, losing its strength through dilution.

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