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SweetOblivionover 13 years agoI like the slightly manic quality to this verse
And you alter the tempo well - not sure the short verses quite fit the style. They seem to break up the sense a little too much. 8 lines to a verse might have been better. M
fridayamabout 13 years agoA curious poem
the mixture of styles is intruiging. It doesn't quite come off--the rhythm slips now and then, but I enjoyed it very much.
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