by Super_Genius
Congrats on the E. I like how you come back to the dense gray smoke at the end of the poem.
I had the picture perfectly before you told us who she was. Brilliant.
mentioned in Wednesday Review
I saw nothing that gave this an 'E' except the form.
I never would of read this had it been say 10 lines.
About the 4th time I read it I figured I had changed my
mind. The sum of this is greater than all the parts.
This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,500 poems.
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