All Comments on 'PURPOSEless'

Wow, I got this.

I looked at it, right off the bat looks, disorganized, once ya start reading ... straight through, it has a flow of patchwork. Just an odd lil ride with sadness yet a lil of excitement permeates. Like a tease of it, then yet again, it disappears. Overall a good poem. I really like the formatting, and twist.

More Please ~

I enjoyed your write ...thanks for sharing...

A measured build-up to

a powerful metaphor

as relationships founder;

will be looking for more....