All Comments on 'Rain'

With the emphasis on living in the present. I will treasure this poem!

I think it was one of your poems I recently commented on and said that you did well with the rhyme in that poem. But with this poem, I'd love to see it as free verse. I think it could possibly be an improvement.

wow Du this one's awesome

rain ?

very well written

clever and curious

vague in the greatest since!

excellent poem~

Very nice, Miss Du Loc. I could feel the mist on my face.

One thing, tho. "go with the flow"? That was a jarring bit of un-originality. The risk we run when we rhyme.