All Comments on 'Rebirth'

This poem was mention in the New Poems Review in the Poetry Forum today. Please feel free to come along.

well done..with some beautifully flowing words that had me on the edge of my seat. Thanks

This one is far and away the best you've done. Two small points — that very first word should be It's [the contraction for it is; without the apostrophe it becomes a possessive]. Not good for the only typo to be the very first word. The second point is a very minor stylistic point — place explanatory notes after the poem, not before. //corrected my own typo//