All Comments on 'Relentless Tide'

rule! This is a wonderful collection of words in just the right lines.

...Fawnie. Everything you write gets stronger! No extras, nothing that's not needed. Write like this for a while, and when you expand again, the words will be pure.

voice in the vastness of aquatic poems. A unique beauty, fawnie, truly.

really well done! I'm late reading most of the poems and I'm amazed and envious of this good stuff. But not envious enough to not want more. :)

Man I'm glad I looked at the board this morning. The

best surf description I've seen. Do it right, do it quick.

Like every 7th wave, you carry a force stronger than

the rest.