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by readyandwilling79

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My Erotic TrailMy Erotic Trailover 17 years ago
remeber

I enjoyed the poem's meaning and it's flow, the last line may flow better if it were spelled out...

'How great it would be to be a child again.'

perhaps, but mainly, I liked your write! (~_~)

LeBrozLeBrozover 17 years ago
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And while remembering

Don't let youthful innocence

Slip away...

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