All Comments on 'Restraint'

Excellent word imagery in a such a small compass. A good example of "less is more". Thanks for sharing your genius!

love it. Excellent poem.

Not even questioning the smile of knowing that crossed my face when i read this poem. great job!

v~

~But that's my soul just there

Greeting the chandelier

Shamelessly flirting amongst

Dangerous crystals

Illuminated and bedazzled~

great images and perfect word choices.

very Nice

thank you

An excellent example of a well written erotic poem. You don't have to be graphic to be sexy. This poem is a good step above the normal Lit. erotic offering.

Nicely done - Thank you.

the subtlety within the poem is enhanced by your subtle wording. Wonderful poem...

jim : }

I enjoyed the balance of this poem, the short lines slowing the reading through the first half and then the sudden leap with the soul into the chandelier. Good images there, and a good control of diction that nicely expresses both the actions and the emotions. Thanks for a pleasant read.

Those two words "made" this for me. So casual, yet so revealing. ~Imp