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by JUDO
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jd4georgeover 19 years agoThe form adhered to the title.
To begin with, I wasn't sure if I was going to like it. Quickly, I found the rhythm of the words and found myself delivered to your interesting closing lines:
"Towels wipe away
Madness -
The edge
Of this girl's stay."
Nice read of a form I don't particularly like. Thanks, JUDO.
Tathagataover 19 years agoI'll say
it again.
I love this....
and it's pretty accurate...from what I've been told...
Maria2394over 19 years agothe title
is accurate and enticing :) perfect pacing for a poem like this, good work
Dustystarover 19 years agoRed Fish, Blue Fish
has nothing on you. Imagery to the point, very much enjoyed, thank you.
WickedEveover 19 years agoI love those last two stanzas
You do great with rhyme and the ending is excellent.
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