by JUDO
You do great with rhyme and the ending is excellent.
has nothing on you. Imagery to the point, very much enjoyed, thank you.
is accurate and enticing :) perfect pacing for a poem like this, good work
it again.
I love this....
and it's pretty accurate...from what I've been told...
To begin with, I wasn't sure if I was going to like it. Quickly, I found the rhythm of the words and found myself delivered to your interesting closing lines:
"Towels wipe away
Madness -
The edge
Of this girl's stay."
Nice read of a form I don't particularly like. Thanks, JUDO.