All Comments on 'Rice On White'

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"New Poem Reviews"

thanks for the journey~

this shows a strong measurement of committment, and by all means a tradition that still holds value in todays get married and get divorced statistics, and which upholds through all the variances of life, that a marriage of survival is truly a reason to celebrate. this is a very beautiful and well crafted piece.

deserves 100 on sentiment alone,

just one mention, on longer poems, I would prefer longer lines

A heartfelt and symbolic reflection upon life's most treasured union. Lovely!

A shame that more relationships today don't endure as they once did

Well done, WV! A nice tribute with beautiful images.

Flyguy

You did a lovely job with this poem. :)

of strength...blue

As I mentioned above, poetry confuses me. I don't know what this poem meant. Is it about Her mom or life or painting white picket fences? As I said, I don't know.

All I do know is that MISTRESS Vixxx wrote it, so it turned me on. Yeah, even though it's non-erotic, my heat-seeking moisture missile is poised for a ballistic trajectory, as soon as MISTRESS Vixxx commands me to blast off.

Ahhhh, I'm not in any kind of trouble, am I? Forging pocket steel over a mom poem?

Property of MISTRESS Vixxx

=>Her craaaaaaaayon

"It'd be bigger if it weren't so darn cold out."

The Magnificent Warrior Queen speaks of romance,

of dry grained rain and romantic sentimentalities;

the stronger the shell, the softer the heart;

But don't tell her that I said that!

And thanks for a sharing so special.

Love this moment of so sweetly reminiscing over images of the parents' wedding day. Patricia