All Comments on 'Riding Hood'

Excellent! I could imagine the entire act. Right from exposing your pink lips under the red hood, you took me on an erotic ride of an adventurous journey of the forbidden paths towards pain and pleasure, where the breath is lost and satisfaction is found in blood and seed, as a result of pounding and biting and chewing and sucking and fucking like there's no tomorrow and nobody to witness the marks and scars making immortal memories that will accompany for the years to come, while we prepare to cum, together and forever!

Passionately erotic, henceforth, deep in the forest. Thank for your creative energies

Appreciate what you are trying to create, but for me the sex within/between the lines does not resonate erotically — like a first pass that needs more work. The other poem you posted today resonated — you could feel.

A fierce submission!

Passionate and erotic…..

Red Riding Hood went out one day

To Grandma's she was bound

But when she got there, alas! alack!

She found a hairy wolf hound.

"What big eyes you have," she said

They're a lovely shade of red."

"Never mind my eyes," replied the wolf.

As he lay on Grandma's bed.

"What a long tongue you have," she said

Eyeing the wolf's slobbering jaws

"Never mind my tongue," replied the wolf

As he licked his hairy paws.

"And oh! your body is so strong,"

Red Riding Hood was smitten

"Never mind my body," replied the wolf

"I know you're really DampKitten"

And in a trice, the wolf sprang up

And pulled DK down on the bed,

His hairy cock went in her mouth

Good job she liked giving head.

He filled her mouth with wolfy cum

She swallowed like a good 'un

And then he fucked her back and front

DampKitten'd never had so much fun.