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YOU SHALL NOT PASS
all alone, you call my name with a finger
in your frame where the paint drips…
your legs drawn up like rabbit ears
your rational mind in a receding dress
in soft mindful footfalls you enter my room
entering me in, knowing this
I will bite you
on your soft white under pillow.
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DampKittenabout 2 months agoI love the alliteration and consonance as poetic elements. I really like your unique word choice and imagery.
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