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by The Gentle Man06
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LeBrozover 18 years ago~~
Only substantive suggestion would be in that third line - omit the color of the roses - it seems to flow better without that one extra word.
f-cynyrover 18 years agosad,
but i just loved the line"between midnight thighs." very very evocative.
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