All Comments on 'Roller Coaster'

Fantastic first submission, angel! I'm so proud of you! :)

and is not available on a coaster or carousel, TK U MLJ LV NV

very evocative Angel...fabulous stuff!

Love it :)

you brought your own fan club

and then the beast shows up

two things, it is a little unfair to others

and here is the most important part, fans can be an impediment to writing development

in your poem, I don't know who is talking, it appears to be two people

I didn't vote

I like it very much BBWangeleyes. It makes me think of the conflicts in our relationships....how we are ignored or suffocated....pushed and pulled......the tensions of our commitments and how we are all conflicted at times.......It made me think....Thank you.

Simply lovely. Thanks so much for sharing this with us. ~ Red