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Click hereShe stands erect,
dressed in fluorescent pink;
and in her heart ~
flecks of pure gold;
she's healthy as can be.
Tall and lean,
man's roving hand is scorned;
a smaller man is called upon
to help her desperate need.
And there upon a petal,
passionate pink inspires;
two ladybugs conjoined
to make more aphid eaters.
© Leon Brozyna 2005
- COMMENTS
KOLKOREabout 16 years agoYes, I was reminded... and was wondering what Gertrude Stein would have said about your rose, better yet, about the rose of the ladybugs...
p.s. Now is always the best time to smile!
CaPic267about 17 years agoLeon, There you go, showing your love of roses. But I admit, never thought of ladybugs as aphid eaters! CP
Prince_of_purpleabout 17 years agoI like this poem it's very sweet! It makes me feel happy!
SweetDealabout 18 years agoYou've given me an image in my head with those ladybugs on a rose, getting it on. I don't know if I'll look at a rose the same way!!
iqespressoabout 18 years agoNo matter how small we all have to eat, even if it is a little dried slime... It made me laugh...
EmJ0385about 18 years agoJust look! Two ladybugs getting it on, here on this bright sunny spring day. Let me read a few more poems, and I'm out the door. Emily
sweet GA peachesover 18 years agohave the ability to
allow me to 'see' this
happening, thats power
my friend, USE IT !!
and continue, please...
sGp
My Erotic Taleover 18 years agoI enjoyed the way this formed and like a mental movie, it unfolded perfectly that ended with poetic charm. I enjoyed your "Rose" poem emensley. (~_~)
