All Comments on 'Rules Of Encounter'

by anglosextantyen4u

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UnderYourSpellUnderYourSpellalmost 13 years ago
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I was enjoying the read until I got to the last two stanzas where there seems to be words missing for it to make sense .... maybe a 'what' between 'from earlier'?

'Herself if she really is,

by anything.' lost me completely

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 13 years ago
Something

I've never seen before. A5, no other comment.

simply__mesimply__mealmost 13 years ago
I was surprised

because wasn't expecting much. Never seen your stuff before, but I like the thoughts and the way this is done. The ending made me create a meaning because it is so strange.

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