All Comments on 'Sally Finds Jesus in the Desert'

Rhyme scheme:

A1-B1-A2

C1-B2-C2

D1-B3-D2

E1-B1-E2

F1-B2

F2-G1-H-G2

Rhyme climax, I think, in F1-B2.

Quite complex and imaginative/original. Well done!

Rhythm natural and unforced.

I am not familiar with the places you talk about but I found content and conclusion very funny and enjoyable.

5ved of course.

Serious mulling in my cerebrellum , so here goes : this sympathetic look @ what is euphemistically called " the Dregs " of Society , their travails , fears , experiences from the Pen of a Poet who empathyzies with the Sallys , Susies & Granny's of a World that the " haves" of Society generally sweep below the " Carpet of Consciousness " displays Humanitarian Love of a very High Order !! Bravo GM :5-ed .