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I enjoy your writes <grin (~_~) ...<wearing a... Ricky Ricardo smile <bigrin

Speaking of familiarity

In all the things she says and does.

to read your work again..I used to be that way about jenie...blue

DON'T EVER doubt me again, when I say you have talent.

This is a perfect understated witty observation and comment. I am refering to the poem. Try playing with the line breaks, see if you can make it better. "conversation dance" tripped me, I'm not sure if it is deliberate, it works though.

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hilarious ~!! I knew you had it in you.

Just had to regroup and let it flow eh ~

I love your humor and word play here ~

Also, seems a bit romantic and sweet ~~ just sayin' ~

More Please~

You've captured the tenderness of love in a moment, much enjoyed.

clever and profound -- the world needs more DADA!

funny, how at one time, nothing seems

to matter, but love,then years down the road

the reflection is laughing back at you.

I adored this piece of witty humor love,

and I loved Lucy too... lol..

You have changed something about your writing,

not sure what it is, but want you to know-

though I have always remained partial to you,

this is clever, and made me smile.

sGp