All Comments on 'Seduce Me'

LOL..

you have a way curious,

of bringing the words to life

and making images appear

as a painter with canvas

bringing a picture to life,

so you are..

with words.

-sGp-

is my addiction along with senryu and tanka..and YES...I was seduced by every verse...ty...bluerains

A sexy little number

you have here curious,

I love how this flows

so effortlessly.

Hot piece!

Thanks.

~ JC

Very nicely done, really liked the second stanza and the last line brought me to my knees.

ty,bd

this brings to mind a loving evening of oral tantalisation, of the best kind - very provocative

I am seduced;

you make my tongue feel underused...

I am on my knees and wishing that I had the ability to use words that can bring a picture to life. The erotic thought process of this feeble mind came to life reading your work.