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KobaKobaover 13 years ago

Magnificent poetry!

AngelineAngelineover 13 years ago
A lovely ghost of a poem

the lack of substance is what makes it alluring and impossible to pin down. Seamless.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 13 years ago
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it's probably me, not in the mood mode, 100

vrosej10vrosej10over 13 years ago
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Cool poem with lots possibilities. Well written with lots of good imagery. My only problem is with the second line. You could have dropped the 'and' and it would have tightened up a lot.

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