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by UpSideDown1

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SeattleRainSeattleRainabout 20 years ago
You go!

I bet this looks great on paper too. My kind of poem. Reminds me of the days before the honeymoon was over. How things change

Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnabout 20 years ago
Well said

Great emotions here. Thank you for sharing.

YDDYDDabout 20 years ago
Good for you!

I like the ending.

"takin" ??

"laying" - are you going for a double meaning?

WickedEveWickedEveabout 20 years ago
I like it

I see a couple of spots that I'd tweak a bit, but it's pretty darn good. Thanks for sharing. :)

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