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dcpoet44dcpoet44almost 20 years ago
nice concept

i really enjoyed this piece. my favorite stanza is this one: She remembers

Through the eyes of the child

Wating,always waiting

Wanting,needing,

Always inside bleeding

For something not there.

it flows nice and it ends powerfully. nice job!

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