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by seannelson
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erectus123almost 11 years agonice Sean
just a thought, take the "like" out of this line and it reads better to me
"endless like windows in a"= "endless windows in a"
erectus123almost 11 years agoto keep haiku
just add "are" as "broken vesicles are" (one "s" I think in vesicles)---hope you are not battling shingles!
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