All Comments on 'Silence'

I liked this. I had the impression it was the imagined conversation one has with his or her lover when alone. The simple language and syntax added to that affect for me. The only end rhymes of the poem in lines 12 & 13 gave it a nice touch too; however, the comma ending line 12 isn't necessary.

I like the imagery in this. And maybe I just like the evening silence.