by BlackNudeMan
and very classy erotica. Not once did I see the word "fuck". I especially liked this passage-
<i>Where you wanted them
Where you want them
Where you beg for them</i>.
The wanted/want was a nice play. Overall, I enjoyed the poem, one spot you adverb-ed a bit too much- "tirelessly/silently" it threw me off a little.
I truly enjoyed reading this and hope to see more work from you.
~NJ
.... in gasps and sighs and moans. Classy erotica - sensual without being crass; intimate without being crude.
Lovely!
Fx
Your writing is as beautiful as ever. The visions you conjure are simply exquisite, and your words take my breath away. I look forward to your next submission with great anticipation.