All Comments on 'Similes'

i mentioned this poem in the New Poem Review thread in the Poetry Forum. please feel free to come along and join in with other poets. the 50% temperature rating i've given you is so that it does not affect future temp ratings. - wildsweetone.

....100% better if all the "She is like"s were left off. You have some great lines here, we know from the title they're similes, could you package them more attractively?

Tess