All Comments on 'Singapore Knights'

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tazz317tazz317almost 12 years ago
ANYTIME BACCHUS GET INVOLVED

the party continues in reveling and debauchery. TK U MLJ LV NV

live4passionlive4passionalmost 12 years ago
insider

god you have a way with words ;)

NeonuroticNeonuroticalmost 12 years ago
Nicely done.

This is my favorite kind of poetry with descriptions of a place and observations with a tone to convey the mood. You wrote this so well that I felt like I was there.

SweetOblivionSweetOblivionalmost 12 years ago
Nice Imagery

A pretty concoction

TzaraTzaraalmost 12 years ago
I quite liked this.

Evocative of a different place (different for me, anyway), and I loved the lines:

the only person calling anyone daddy

was paid to do so

erectus123erectus123almost 11 years ago
well

done! the world is evidently the same

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