All Comments on 'Slithering Dan'

Wow. This piece took SEVERAL readings to get all the nuances. Very deep, rich wording. Great job. Thanks.

You're reminding me of the beat movement here, with this controlled rant style. This is a damn fine piece, and I really enjoy your voice. I could hear it aloud, which I see as a good sign that your language is your own. Very, very well done. Thanks.