All Comments on 'slow, so slow'

There are some wonderful images throughout, with my favorite (perhaps) being:

"from hungry lips

down face down throat

crossing paths with history

and extend

that pillow book calligraphy

on a journey

always as virginal

and anew"

One image I rather wish were pushed a little harder is that of "crucifixion". (Perhaps in the title?)

A good read, Liar!

Your smooth with both your phrasing and images. I especially liked the lead in.

I like the structural representation of action and response, as well as the linguistic and metaphorical descent! JD's right about the title, though.

a good poem with a stinky title. lol

Wonderful!!!

enticing. Hot read. Thanks.

the lines 'your most/most everything' drove it home for me. As weird as this may sound it was very respectful and precious all at once. Lovely.

I liked the title. :D

Damn hot poem, Liar.

(thermometer left at default and does not reflect my vote.)

Very very nice poem, Liar...

This caught me ...

so I linger in that

breathless pit

and taste your pulse

once more

before breathless

I descend

*shiver*

just the way i like it... that description was perfect!