All Comments on 'Small Clit Girls'

I must admit, the title really scared me. But I swallowed my fear and was taken along on a "ride" that quite surprised me in its blend of wicked sensuality and humour. I'm still giggling. Thanks for sharing.

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But only with your wicked pen. Loved it!!!

You autumn's poet! You shared to the world about us and never told me :)

It was (is?) sweet of you (after she had got your rocks off) to take the time and give her both of your thighs ;) so she could have her sexual fill. Most men wouldn't. You are one of a kind IQ.

Very young and in L.A.

with all that sex going on, I hate to mention this, but you forgot an "ED" on the word gather.

enjoyable erotic poem

~ maria

As sweat has gather on her golden brow