All Comments on 'So Coeld'

Welcome to Lit

This first piece shows some promise

But it also reveals the need for some careful editing:

"trying to find a mining." I'd guess ought to read

"trying to find a meaning."

or

"your torturing me." probably would read

"you're torturing me." (the contraction for you are).

But that last line is the best in the piece, showing real promise:

"Getting caught in the closet of a meaningful dream."

Good luck.