All Comments on 'Some Of My Favorite Sex Acts'

You set the scene and developed tension with this piece, but you didn't reach a conclusion. This is showing me a porn movie, two people having sex. Personally, I like my hard core fucking to be wrapped in a bit of romance.

Good word choices, nice and dirty without being unbelievable. Thank you for your poem.

Carrie

I agree with the previous comments - you started out on a journey but didn't arrive. HOWEVER, I enjoyed what I read - maybe add a last stanza?