All Comments on 'Sonnet XXX'

A sex sonnet in iambic pentameter (almost at least. You're last line had an extra syllable). You must have some literature studies in your background. I can only imagine your professor's expression if you turned something like this in!

It was clever and sexy. You created a nice flow with a natural beat that wasn't distracting or forced. Great job!

That was cool and written with respect to true versification. Thank you for this pleasure, Kimbelina :)