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by CeVin_ChienElle

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CeVin_ChienElleCeVin_ChienElleabout 3 years agoAuthor

The not-minor break in the rhythm in line seven is something that many people I've known might stumble over.

29wordsforsnow29wordsforsnowabout 3 years ago

Very true, there's a lot between zero and one, a whole universe of...mmh, fractions, shades, nuances? Wavelengths, maybe, and finding the one harmonic with yourself usually works best if you don't have to pretend that you're of a different frequency.

Tune in, turn on.

Thanks for sharing

Levitating_BedLevitating_Bedabout 3 years ago

This is a great write.

I like might in italics. Should might always be in italics?

Mentioned in the New Poems recs over in the forums: https://forum.literotica.com/showpost.php?p=93636084&postcount=694

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