All Comments on 'Spirited Flower'

by Shadow_Kyss

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kajira_dekakajira_dekaalmost 19 years ago
beautiful!!

Shadow_Kyss-

this poem is just so beautiful! such a telling tale and love the parallel between the struggle of the flower and the struggle we all face to grow and blossom in our own ways.... and soooo glad the reader didn't pluck the flower!

more more more!

-deka

LeBrozLeBrozalmost 19 years ago
Lovely Imagery

An interesting style, a bit different for me;

But you share a positive outlook,

so I went for the ride to see;

A view much "better" than your "Contemplation"

will look for more to see what you say

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