All Comments on 'St. Valentines Day Massacre'

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Esperanza_HidalgoEsperanza_Hidalgoabout 14 years ago
I liked this

and thought it good. Esp the last few lines.

greenmountaineergreenmountaineerabout 14 years ago
Nicely done!

Loved the line "Lepers do not leave your home tonight" and "Where knife blows to the heart are only a word away." These seemed to represent the true feelings of the narrator and his loneliness and bitterness. I liked the sequay line too of endless comedy reruns, but "That bear no resemblance to the real world" seemed out of place, given the power of the other 3 lines.

All in all, however, I really liked it.

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