All Comments on 'Stateless'

is a killer.

Nice work

Five.

when taken alone, one element against another - too many differences... but only in the coming together, that moment of non-thinking, does any of it make sense.

whatever your intentions as the author, i love this. its language, its imagery, its ... richness.

the multiple meaning of the word "state", I can probably tell you what this was run through and running against. Since we seem to be playing a game of knowing and unknowing, I leave it as that. A little uncertain?

Suggestion, do it with "quark", post it in that cheesy thread. That would be amusing.

twelveone: Actually, you'd be surprised at how much you DID understand! Thanks for the input regardless.

desert verses from deserted senses

how the fuck did we get to the Catskills

Oh alternative universe

but I do have some questions

because nothing works

in my laborious quest

for a reason

Got One?

I'd love to hear it.

I did not vote

four.. you are blowing Me away. what a pleasure.

or perhaps.. 4 on the floor?

That last line took me down ;)

Each stanza is vivid as a photo embedded with your fine poetry.