All Comments on 'Stone Dream'

perhaps...ahh...limestone...as "theblue" said to me...hot coffee in a can...winks...blue

This reads aloud very well, but on the page, it seems to lack punctuation? The last four lines are superb.

Ah, a Kaishaku poem that is not about food - I think. Do I need to know, perhaps, I better not, reminds me a little too much

like my life.

Interesting poem. Creates interesting images in the mind when read out