All Comments on 'Straightforward'

by Curiouswife

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LeBrozLeBrozover 18 years ago
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You are waaay too good;

the set-up is divine,

leaving us exposed;

to that last line ~

what a kicker!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
so much

words of resonation here...how many have gone through this door...and you make them remember...and sigh just for the exerience...thanks..bluerains

RhymeFairyRhymeFairyover 18 years ago
Straight Shooter ~

Love the way this poem

just flows .. smooth an silky.

Then Whammmoo ~ Straight shootin

from the hip gurl ~!! Love it ~!!

More Please ~!!

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