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demure101demure101over 11 years agoAuthor
Typo again...

It should read Fervent, not Fevent. Sorry.

twelveoonetwelveooneover 11 years ago
5ed goddamn

i thought, but no, "vague blue-grey mists" even allowing for, this one pops. you got some nice distance weaving here

fevered river narrow

furnace terror

fevent drive

tazz317tazz317over 11 years ago
WILL ANOTHER RESCUE ARRIVE

or is one even en-route, TK U MLJ LV NV

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